The movement is integral to the storytelling. Good job. You've got some really nice handheld work and lots of dynamic shots that add energy into the subject. At the :40 mark you break continuity of screen direction. Ali is exiting the door from frame left to right and then coming through on the other side from right to left. It makes it look like she is turning back. You can avoid this by choosing a camera position on the other side of the door that allows her to continue moving left to right.
The movement is integral to the storytelling. Good job. You've got some really nice handheld work and lots of dynamic shots that add energy into the subject. At the :40 mark you break continuity of screen direction. Ali is exiting the door from frame left to right and then coming through on the other side from right to left. It makes it look like she is turning back. You can avoid this by choosing a camera position on the other side of the door that allows her to continue moving left to right.
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